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Review:MissMdsty says:
I managed to get home in time for the first review! Yey me!

You really need to stop playing with Bellatrix. It can't be healthy. She is so creepy. But funny enough, I never imagined she took baths. Something about her makes me think she's "above" such normal things as a bath. Also, I don't want to imagine her naked. That's now branded on the inside of my eyes. Thanks for that.

I loved how this was a chapter centered on the girls (and the Wicked Witch of the West, or WWW as we will refer to her from now on).

I love the Sirius/Lily friendship in this story. It's such a cozy picture and they're so comfortable with each other. And Lily is indeed a lot like Remus, the voice of reason. Poor Peter... I guess we're just at the tip of the iceberg that led him to do what he did. I remember you saying we'll see his reasoning as the story unfolds.

Alice's parents stike me as very odd. In my head, I associate Alice with Neville and something about them doesn't fit right with the posh and proper parents. But I love her smart mouth and how she isn't afraid to be herself and call them out on issues such as elves' welfare.

I can't wait for Belle to arrive in France. I think that is going to be an epic chapter. What you said about Sirius and acting on impulse, I think it's going to happen there. And I'm curious to see how Belle will react to this dynamic. I imagine it'll be very strange for her, seeing her two worlds "collide" in the family's living room. She is such a strong and amazing woman and I love how this OC grew from the beginning to this point, that to me she is as central in the Marauder Era universe as Lily or Alice are.

What else...? I love Mr and Mrs P. They're amazing and I want to take them home.

Lovely chapter as usual, m'dear!

Author's Response: Yay Ral! hahah! Hi ♥

But Bellatrix is SO MUCH FUN TO PLAY WITH! I kind of thought the same thing when I started this. Like... Bellatrix in the bath? Weird. But then it was the perfect opportunity to show how psycho she is even just by herself :P

WWW HAHA perfect! She's crucio you so fast for that! :P

I'm so happy you like their friendship. I'm waiting for someone to think I'm shipping them or something, but you know that's the last thing I'd do :P I just think they would have a really special friendship apart from her being James's gf.

I had such a hard time trying to figure out what to do with Alice's parents. We know that they aren't in Neville's life, but between having to kill off the Evans and eventually Olivia and William (don't even want to think about that! :( ) I just couldn't find anymore realistic ways to kill parents, haha. So I figured I'd make them into the sort of people that, once their daughter gets really involved in the war, don't care to be involved with her. And therefor the type of people that their only son would NOT go to :P I'm so happy you like her smart mouth with them, haha!

Ahhh I can't tell you how much your comments about Belle mean to me. I love her, but I created her. So that's a given. But knowing you love her just makes me want to do a happy dance.

I'm so happy you like this chapter, and I can't WAIT to see what you think about next weeks!! Eeek!!


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