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Review:megthechef43 says:
mary_ducks,

I'll probably be reviewing most of your chapters, so do you mind if I just call you Mary?

This is a great first chapter. It really explained the situation between Ron and Hermione. I like that Draco is friendly in this chapter and helpful. I thought it was absolutely adorable that Draco danced with her. I like that Hermione had already said that she would find someone that actually enjoyed her company and then ... enters Draco. Perfect.

Gosh, I want to punch Ron in the face!! He is being such an ass to Hermione. One part I didn't get is when "Ron said not looking at Hermione, she looked like a princess in her sky blue gown and seeing her look so beautiful would just make it harder on her when he broke up with her." Was this suppose to mean that Ron couldn't say she was pretty because it would only hurt her? Because right now it reads that because she looks so good it will hurt her when they break up??

Great plot line...

I'll be reading on...

Meg

Author's Response: so it means that he would like to say something nice to her, but it would be a slap in the face to her later on when he breaks up with her so he'd rather be distant than loving

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