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Review:academica says:
Hi! Here from Team Blue for the Review Battle!

It's interesting to read something from Tom's perspective at this time in his life. You can already see the cruelty we've come to expect from Voldemort, like the incident with the rabbit, but there are also faint reminders of the fact that we're dealing with a young boy who has a child's understanding of things at times. For instance, that line about how it's understandable that he has strong powers already because he's the odd one is interesting, because he doesn't see it the way Dumbledore does, with the latter being worried.

I think this was a great choice for this challenge, because it feels like the length is appropriate here. Your writing is nice and smooth, as well. Nice job!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Go Team Blue!


Yes I thought that it would be interesting to explore this part of his life as well, as I don't think there are ever really any mentions about it.

I'm glad that you felt I was coming through with a child's understanding as that was important for me to do, as Voldemort was very mature at this part of his life, but so immature in other respects.

I'm glad that you suited the challenge well, as when I first started to writing it, I thought it would be the ideal length for it.

Thanks for the great review, Kiana :)

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