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Review:potterfan310 says:
I really like this, we get to see more of Lily and she's slowly coming out of her shell.

I'm glad they moved her to a bigger, nicer room and that someone (I'm guessing Ginny or James) thought to bring her, her favourite things.
Perhaps they thought it would bring comfort to her or that they do remember her.

If you're British there's a really good show on E4 at the moment called My Mad Fat Diary. Reading this makes me think of it as it covers mental health issue. It's really good!, try and watch it if you can :D

I really like your Lily and I can't wait to see where you'll go with this. Does she better/worse, does she fall in love with another patient. All these things are whirring round in my mind and I'm really, really curious.

There were a few little spelling errors that can be easy fixed and I know I said this before, but the spacing. Again it can be easily fixed. Maybe invest in a Beta - pop over to the forums to find one :)

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I've heard of the show but can never find the time to watch it, but I'll check to see if it's on replay. Obviously I can't tell you the storyline, but it's great to know that you're so interested. Thank you for still reading!

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