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Review:ginnyhermionelily says:
I love how you have connected Tonks, Remus' connection and Marlene, Sirius' connection. I think you can go allot of cool directions with that especially if you decide to bring either of those two characters into harry's life.

I also like how you've made Remus part of harry's family, in a way that it is like he has two parents. but i think it would be cool if he got caught or Dumbledore figured it out.

I also think you should bring out why Malfoys' is looking for harry a little more maybe show how that character is a little more evil.

Oh and maybe bring back Draco a little more he's been missing for a little while and you gave the me the opinion that he would be playing a big part but maybe you have that all planed for latter on in harry's life.

Over all I love you story it is one of two have bothered flavoring and commenting on. I find your story gripping interesting and not a ripoff of anything else I have read. It is Thoroughly enjoyable.
Please please please do not abandon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I agree that there are a lot of possible directions I can take it. In the end, though, it probably won't be me who decides - these characters seem to end up writing themselves! :P
Thank you. Remus was an obvious choice to bring into the family, simply because he was so close with Sirius, Lily and James before everything happened, and felt obliged to keep looking for Harry until he found him. It was nice to finally have him know the truth and give him some peace. Really? Hmm... :P
Lucius, quite simply, is looking for Harry because he believes Harry will be the next Dark Lord (which Draco overheard him saying). Lucius' role will become more pronounced in later chapters. :P
Draco's been missing lately because there aren't as many interesting things happening in his life as there are in everyone else's. :P Like Lucius, he'll be around more in later chapters. :)
Thank you so much! It's so wonderful, as an author to hear how highly you regard my work! :D I try to be as original as possible, so I'm glad you think I'm succeeding! Thank you!
I won't abandon it - I'm having far too much fun writing! :D
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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