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Review:adluvshp says:
Happy Valentines review-a-thon!

I stumbled across this story since it was the featured one-shot on The Golden Snitches and I am so glad I did.

This was truly an amazing piece of writing. It's awesome how I got a chance to come across some of these brilliant stories, thanks to the review-a-thon and thus my search for new stories!

I loved your portrayal of Severus and the way you entwined him with the seven deadly sins. The relation of it all with Lily was fabulous, it clearly showed just how much his life revolved around her and only her. Your writing style was awesome too, and your descriptions were amazing. I especially loved the ending, of "Hope" being his "ultimate sin" (sort of) that destroyed him. That was just great. I really wish I could write as well as you do!

I would say a lot more but I need to rush to bed right now (before my mum totally gets annoyed at me for still being up hehe). Once again, a beautifully written piece, so hats off!

10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing this for me! And for saying such sweet things in the thread at TGS, too -- I've been meaning to post and thank you for days. You have no idea how much it means to me that you took the time to do that. :)

I love writing Severus, and I'm so glad that people seem to enjoy the way I write him, too. He is just endlessly fascinating to me, you know? I'm not sure where exactly the idea for writing about him in connection with the seven deadly sins came from, but it was a real exercise, and it was sort of like putting together a puzzle. In other words, it was a lot of fun!

I'm so, so glad that you were able to read this for me. And I'm pleased you enjoyed it, too! Thanks a million, Aditi! ♥


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