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Review:ValWitch21 says:
The beginning of the chapter has got to be magical teenage interaction at its best!

James, going into Crazy Quidditch Captain mode (capitals are necessary) and waking his team with a Howler made a lot of sense, actually.

What really killed me though was Belle's comment. It reminds me of a fairly awkward situation, which made me laugh even louder.

WHY, BELLE? WHY DIDN'T YOU?

Aww, James got Lily a kitten! I loved your description of her reaction, once again I really felt like she was a transcription of JK's writing onto the screen.

Have I told you before that I thought you were amazing? &hearts

Author's Response: So, usually I'm super planned out, but the begining of this one came out of nowhere. I really ended up liking James in it though. Because how could you not? The boys a brat, but his intentions are so good!

You know that I'm going to eventually just melt if you keep telling me I'm amazing, right? Like into a puddle. That's okay. I won't complain :P

Thank you again so much my dear!!


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