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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Oh, dear. This chapter.

So many lovely interactions, and Lily's memories again &hearts

Can I just say how much I love the parents you portray in your stories? And Petunia apologising, and ugh. I'm too tired to be coherent.

The best part of this chapter, I think, was the detail you put in. Instead of the traditional "and then he used a heating charm", you actually made one up. MADE IT UP IN LATIN -- having done latin for three years, I can tell you, there is NO WAY I would ever have the motivation to try and translate English into proper latin.

I just noticed one small typo: "Alice shouted in a rare show of tempter." Shouldn't that be temper? Other than that, I find absolutely nothing to criticise.

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out the typo!! Those pesky things.

I'm so happy you like how I portray the parents in this. I think showing how James and Lily grew up is really important to understand them, you know?

Ahhh haha I honestly just typed it into google translator. But I'm really excited that you liked the details!! I always want it to feel like it fits in with the HP world as best as I can, and JKR was usually pretty thorough about this sort of stuff.

Thank you so much ♥


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