Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there! I’ve seen your name around on the forums and on review for stories, so I wanted to come by and stalk...err.. check your AP ;).

I love the way you’ve already started characterizing everyone. George and Lee are destructive little force that are constantly threatening to tear down the house (no surprise there) Angelina lets them humor themselves so long as they don’t take it too far... a few very important pieces of characterization that were places so well! I love when authors do that.

And you didn’t ignore the fact that Fred II’s mother is black by making him pale as snow with red hair. THANK YOU. Although he seems to have the nickname of Perce, right? I don’t read a ton of next Gen... going to google. okay. Google is telling that she does only have one brother and that it’s Fred. So I’m sticking with Perce having to be a nickname.

Oh! And Hermione just referred to him as Fred! Okay, it’s definitely just a nickname. Sorry, I probably seem like such an idiot. As I said, I’ve only read a handful of next gen so I’m not familiar with some of the small details ;).

I liked that you were able to include a pretty good amount of the Weasley family members in this! The section with George and Roxanne was incredibly sweet. I love the idea of George having a daddy’s girl.

Also! You’ve made Audrey so different than I’ve ever read her (and I’ve never really liked things I’ve read about her). I know she might don’t be a huge part of this, but she’s intelligent and fiery and brings Percy out of is stuffed up comfort zone. Awesome job with that!

Hahhah George telling her that the OWLS he got was all about luck. That’s so perfect. I’m getting all these warm George Fred leaving Hogwarts on their brooms feels.

Their betting with the kids! Not WITH them obviously, but with who takes them for the summer. That’s genius. And I loved that it seems like their all so close. The idea that George and Percy would have gotten a lot closer after.. after.. you know... is one I really like, and it definitely seems like that in this first chapter.

Ohhh and who is the Benjamin Malfoy!? Nice cliffy, m’dear!!!

I’m excited to read the next chapter, this is a lovely start ♥

Author's Response: Hello!

Ooh, what a nice surprise for me! Hello, nice to meet you, I'm Gabbie! :3 I have seen you on the forums as well but hadn't had the time to properly attack your AP either. Perhaps I'll do that soon? Mwhahahhhaa.
So! Thanks for stopping by to this NG that I've been working on. Means alot, I never think that any of my stories are very popular or anything so I make a big deal when I get a review. :D
Bwhaha, George and Lee are very good friends and horrible to have in your home. Angelina adn the rest have known one another for years so she has a higher tolerance of them than say, a stranger would. Hahah. I thought that making those little hints of family life were very important for this story since family means alot to Roxanne.
Alot of people have commented on Fred the Second's nickname. But yes, its "Perce" short for "Percival" which is his middle name and also their Uncle Percy's whom he's named after. Can you imagine saying Frederick Percival Weasley the Second all the time? *Shudders*
And my god, thank you so much for pointing out the fact that he's black. I don't understand or like the whitewashing but alot of people don't like Georgelina and sometimes don't add her into their stories at all. I mean, Angelina is black so duh, her kids are going to have darker skin and hair, etc, etc. :p
Being black myself I had to wonder why that was such a big deal. :p
Anyhoo! I tried to put as much of the Weasley's into this chapter as possible. They're a big family and its so confusing to keep all of them straight, I have chicken scratch notes on each of the grandkids somewhere.must find that eventually. Hahhaa.
Yep, George is my favorite Weasley like EVER and making Roxanne a daddy's girl just seemed to fit. He's the sort of parent that spoils his kids and doesn't care about the consequences. Hahhaa.
Audrey IS alot different from how she's usually written, isn't she? I think so, I mean, I've only read a handful of stories with her and never really seen one quite like mine. :)
Ego boost? Perhaps. Hahhaa.
She's good for Percy though and helps him take life a little less seriously so I'm glad that you liked it!
Bwhaha, George is such a liar! He and Fred didn't even try hard on their OWLs! Hahaha.
George and Audrey bet on the children alot, they're very good frenemies? Hahhaah.
But George and Percy are very close after Fred's death. D': R.I.P. Freddie! I wanted to make that very clear, I hate thinking of everyone so distant with one another, it makes me sad. :(
Beware of Benjamin Malfoy as you continue reading. He's not for the faint of heart. HAHAHA. ;)
Thanks for reading and I owe you bunches, I hope to see you again soon! :)
Much love,
Gabbie

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net