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Review:theglitterfactory says:
This is kind of a review of the two most recent chapters because I don't want to have to go back to the other one to write a separate review.. Anyway, I'm glad that you haven't changed the character's personalities, they still seem like the same people they were at the beginning of the story.. Sort of. I was surprised though, in the last chapter, that Kim wasn't very angry at Oliver. But then I guess she had plenty of time to get over him, so...

Also, I liked Grace in this chapter, she was really quite amusing.

Author's Response: She did have time to get over him, it's true. I think she was sufficiently irritated with him when needed, but she also can't deny the fact that she's still attracted to him, which makes her reactions more biased.

I hope this made sense, and thanks for your review!


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