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Review:Jchrissy says:
Of course they do. What's so bad about a deranged person killing elderly veterans and duplicating their wands? Well, a lot of stuff, but not nearly as many as this same maniac stealing and duplicating the ELDER wand.

Something about Harry's thoughts surrounding how tired he felt really made sense. He's lived such a high intensity life, and he chose a career that followed just that. And now, the world he worked so hard to create safety for, is facing -- once again-- issues at the hands of a crazy person who wants to be the most powerful, the best.

I seriously have no ideas yet as to who it could be!! I'm keeping my eyes open though.

This is small, but I loved the careers you've given for Harry's children. They're all so right and not seen as often as a pro quidditch player, a law enforcement job, and a pretty daughter. You gave them all very different careers that I can still see fitting them perfectly, and that made me smile.

I really enjoyed watching Rose and Scorpius work together. They're both very intellenget people, and there's almost something comfortable about the way they handle one another.

This was a lovely chapter, m'dear ♥ I'm pretty angry at you for Cliff Hangering me, but now I have a reason to poke at you to hurry and get the next one up ;).

Also, if the spacing issue keeps happening, try simple editor. It's all I use, because you don't end up with those spaces inserting themselves for no reason.



Author's Response: I just love your reviews! You know that, don't you?

This chapter was one of my favorite to write, because the story just takes off and everything starts making sense(at least in my head).

In my mind, Harry has always had to push himself, to do things he didn't necessarily want to do, because he had to. And this time is no different, because now it's personal. This guy was in his house, next to his family and he won't stand for that!

As for the bad guy, we're not there just yet. There are still a few missing pieces of the puzzle!

I'm so happy you like my Rose and Scorpius because I try to get them in balance, not being too comfortable or too formal. Of course sometimes they disobey and start holding hands but I slap them off and keep on writting!

I'll try the simple editor next chapter, hopefully the spacing issue will go away! Thank you so much for the lovely review!


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