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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
I thought you did a great job showing Elena's pain in the chapter. Ever since the story started, you've given us the sort-of impression that Elena is a strong woman and Oliver's death is a wake-up call to us all that she might not be as strong as we think she is. Okay, don't get me wrong because I don't think any less of her. I just think that this incident softens her character a little bit more.

Elena's healer skills did come in handy in this chapter. I thought that it was pretty cool when she was in hysterics and she asked them to get lacewing to calm her down.

Again, I got all the feels when Simon started stroking her hair. Argh. I seriously don't know anymore if he just wants friendship or more. Ugh. :

And there's a mention of Christian again! I'm thinking he was Corinne's boyfriend but he could be her brother too. Ah. I just don't know anymore. I'll leave it up to you to reveal the mysteries since you're the author.

Great job, really! ♥ I know I haven't been much of help and I haven't been giving you a lot of feedback but that's because I don't think I have anything more to say about your story other than it is absolutely amazing! I'm completely in love with it.

~Izzy

51st review out of 100

Author's Response: Ahh I meant to respond to this ages ago! So sorry to have forgotten Izzy!!

Hmm, that's definitely an interesting point. I think you're right that Elena isn't so stoic here--like she can manage things most of the time, but for everyone, there's a time when they just stop coping well.

But yep, even through that she can at least fall back on her training.

Ha- yes. Confusing signals. Keep reading?

Nice catch on the second mention of Christian. Not saying who he is, but that will definitely be revealed later.

You are too sweet! I am so so glad that you are enjoying this story and it's really great to hear what you think of it as you go along! If you decide to keep reading, I will appreciate your future reviews forever and ever :)

Thank you thank you ♥

--Haley


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