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Review:MissMdsty says:
Aaaah, they're so fluffy I could die!

This chapter (for the most part) put a huge smile on my face. I swear my cheeks are hurting from all of it. I love the first part, how James just kissed her in front of everybody before the game. I must say, I was thinking you would just leave them in this awkward phase of not just friends for a few more chapters just to torture me, but I'm happy to see she made her mind up.

I love Mrs. Potter! She reminds me so much of my soon-to-be mother in law, with her attitude and the way she just casually mentioned that James was going with Lily to the wedding.

Bellatrix. I have never read a more sick and twisted Bellatrix than in your story. And that's saying something. I loved the descriptions in that part. You set the mood for the encounter with the Dark Lord perfectly, I got chills up and down my spine from reading it. And the code. That was so twisted it hurt my brain a little but when she started explaining I just thought it was brilliant. Not the plan they have, no, but your writting and your ideas!

Frank and Alice really grew on me in this story and I love how in your Marauder Era, the group doesn't just keep to themselves, like in most stories, but they have friends and spend a lot of time with other people, even though they go on their little adventures alone.

Maybe next chapter we'll see how Sirius reacts to Belle's story? Here's hoping! :D (and before you ask, my next chapter is the queue already!)

Lovely chapter as always, a pleasure to read! Good job, darling!

Author's Response: Hi m'dear! I totally wanted to leave you there and torture you, just so you know. But these stinking characters never seem to behave. You tell them one thing, they do the other. I'm wagging my finger like an angry parents half the time. :P

Aww I'm so happy that you love Olivia ♥ I always get this sort of warm fuzzy feeling when I write her.

Hahahah, I'm taking your comments about Bellatrix as a huge compliment. I'm so tempted so, so often to give her her own one shot. It will happen as soon as I get a good idea for it, I'm sure. I love setting the mood for her scenes. I don't like when she comes to play, because it's never good news, but she's just such a.. yeah. I don't even know the word. I'm so happy that you felt like her scene was done well ♥

Oooh you're hoping may just be right along the right lines ;).

I'm so happy the next chapter is already in the queue! I'm keeping my eyes open for it!

Thank you so much for the review ♥


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