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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Oh my, there are tears in my eyes! :'(

This was a really sad and beautiful one-shot. I loved every single moment of it. The way you wrote this in second person adds so much to the story, I almost felt like I was George for a moment. I know, it's weird.

Reading this gave me a sense of peace. I've read so many one-shots about George being so miserable without his other half and he probably was, but your story kinda went away from that. You made George happy instead and that is just amazing. ♥

Also, I think your characterisation of them is very accurate. They'd be one of the few people that I would expect to find humour in such a grim situation. And that bit about Fred taking a while to get to his own funeral because Lily was fussing over him, aww! That was just such a lovely thing to imagine, for Lily to take Fred almost as her own child; just like what Molly did with Harry.

Your writing is so smooth, I am jealous of you. Where can I get you skills?! This just has to go into my favourites. Definitely something I would love to keep re-reading.

~Izzy

46th review out of 100

Author's Response: Hello!

Another review! Wow, thank you so much!

Oh - sorry about the tears. I think it's a bad side-effect of losing Fred to be honest. I'm still not over it!

I'm glad you got on with the second person - it took me a while to decide whether to use it or not and I'm glad I went for it in the end.

I hate the thought of George being so sad and lonely without Fred so this is my little way of trying to make him better. Characterisation was something I was terrified of getting wrong so you saying that had made my day!

I'm glad you picked up on the Lily comment! That was exactly what I was intending :)

Thanks again for an amazing review!
Lauren


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