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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hi! I told you I'd be back, so here I am. I do apologise if I took quite a while. O.o

You know, for the first three or so lines I didn't realise that it was Al's POV. His and Lexi's thoughts are almost the same, it's kind of funny. Though, I really like how you gave us two different POVs. I feel like I get to know more about the characters that way, plus it's just fun and nice to see what the other person is thinking. Am I even making sense? I don't think so, sorry. :

I love how well-characterised Lexi and Albus are. I've read so many teenage pregnancy stories where when they discover what they had just done, they, somehow, start avoiding each other. Or at least, one person does. I was expecting that to happen here, but the situation was handled more maturely and I'm glad they don't hate each other, so far.

Great job with the second chapter! Hahahah. The last line was really funny. I really love reading your story and I can't wait for to read the next one.

I'll be back. :)

~Izzy

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