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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here!

So I'm here because you helped my fic, His Pack of Four, reach the 100 review mark. :D So first of all, thank you! Second, I picked this fic because I'm a sucker for Fred/George Weasley Fics. They're either just funny or so angsty and by the labels you have...I think I might need some tissues.

Just so you know...I usually read and review as I go along. Not very often do I get so engrossed with a story that I forget to review. You, my dear, managed that. I just...couldn't stop. I was both teary eyed and smiling at the same time. I don't think that has ever happened before with a fic! So many, many kudos to you and your brilliant writing.

The banter between Fred and George was spot on. I wouldn't change anything about it. Even the funeral being colorful seemed so...Fred and George.

The line where Fred mentions Lily fussing over him was great. But the line that got to me the most was 'if he ever hurts our darling baby sister again, that even a murdering nutcase with a bad nose job and a pet snake is no comparison for what si- five brothers can do?'---its like he hasn't come to terms that he's dead.

I'm sorry I don't have much to say but this was just brilliant. Again, you did an amazing job! I'm adding this to my favorites.

Thank you for both the review and the amazing read.

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you so so much for this amazing review and adding the story to your favourites and for recommending it to others too! It was such a lovely surprise and I can't tell you how much it means to me that you enjoyed it!

I don't even know how I'm going to respond to all this awesomeness...

I didn't mean to make you teary eyed but I know most Fred/George things do the same to me so I know how you feel! I'm glad you smiled though, I wanted it to have a few light-hearted spots. This is Fred and George we're talking about! Even in the most depressing situation they still have their humour.

I'm glad you liked the colourful funeral - Fred and black just don't go. I wanted to mention Lily as I wanted to keep with theme that those who love us never truly leave us - hopefully it got across the point that Lily is waiting for Harry. Yeah - I don't think I've come to terms with his death yet either and it's nearly 6 years now I think!

Just thank you once again! The review meant so much to me!

Lauren :)

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