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Review:Emily Weasley says:
This was a great chapter, but it was really sad. I feel really bad for James, but it wasn't only his fault that Selene is pregnant. I really like how Lily was in this chapter. You made her seem really funny, and without her, the whole chapter would have probably been boring. I think it was also very smart to intertwine the whole responsibility thing throughout the chapter. It made James realize that if he took responsibility, Selene wouldn't be pregnant. Good chaper!

Author's Response: Huh. You know, I've never thought about how sad this chapter actually is until now. And here I meant this story to be primarily a comedy. Oh well. Lily is a fun character to write. Actually, I like all of the characters. Thanks for leaving a review!

-Laura


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