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Review:academica says:
Oh my gosh, I didn't even notice that we were at the end of sixth year, but it definitely makes sense, wow!

Okay, I know I just said that the relationship was moving too fast, but that scene in the library was too cute. I think those are the kind of little moments that I want to see more of, especially since they're so different from the usual scenes of kissing and heavy physical activity that I often see in romance stories. It actually made me really want to skip ahead in the chapter to their next meeting!

I really like how you tied this into canon with Draco "standing up" Hermione because he was injured. I can only imagine how she will react when Harry tells her exactly what happened.

This is shaping up to be really good. I'm glad I came by to read more. Thanks again for the swap :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Yes the end of sixth year is upon us and now things really start getting interesting. I really like adding in small really cute awe type moments. Honestly I would rather not focus on the heavy stuff at all though we shall honestly see where this story will take me in the future. I don't have any plans for anything too major to happen but the characters have a way of making things happen themselves. Draco standing her up was something that had to be done for multiple reasons. One being that I'm trying to keep this canon so I still want to add in those major canon events such as Harry coming close to actually killing Draco. Another was more for Hermione to sort of see just how much she was enjoying the sort of friendship that they have and starting to understand that maybe she wants more. I'm glad that you are really enjoying this and I hope that you come back for more! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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