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Review:academica says:
Back again!

I do think it's interesting that it seems to be Hermione, instead of Harry, who is following Draco around in this story. I think it fits well because she needs something to occupy her mind and her time so she doesn't just sit and worry about Ron and avoid Cormac. It also seems to fit with her personality and need to find answers to things.

It's neat to watch Draco and Hermione interact. He's clearly uncomfortable being around her, especially when he thinks that she might be onto him. I like how you described her looking at the apple and trying to figure it out, and alluding to the idea of Bellatrix carving out a piece with her knife (if that's what you were actually alluding to, haha).

This is getting really good. I'm on to chapter nine!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Ah I love getting reviews from you! They just make my day! In my mind, Harry is still attempting to follow Draco around as well though it just happens to be at different times from Hermione. She always tries to slip away when the other two are busy. But yes she does need something to occupy her mind and trying to figure out what Draco is up to is a great task for her. The fact that you think I'm doing the interactions between Draco and Hermione rather well makes me very happy. Its a rather tricky balance to keep and still continue forging them forward. Thanks so much for another wonderful review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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