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Review:academica says:
Hey, sorry for the slight break in reviews. I had to take a phone call and it wound up being kind of a long conversation. Anyway, I'm back to review more!

Things just keep getting harder and harder for poor Hermione! I did really like the little fight between Lavender and Romilda; that was too funny! I also think it was great for showing Lavender's characterization and how Hermione is different from most of the other girls at school. I felt bad for her for having yet another argument with Draco, especially given that it interrupted her schoolwork. I liked how you changed the hospital wing scene so that Hermione left when Ron started to say Lavender's name. I hope that he actually asked for Hermione more clearly after she had already left, so that maybe there will still be hope for them.

Great chapter! Moving on to the next :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thanks so much for coming back and reviewing more! Yes things are not going to be easy for Hermione thats for sure! But as we know, that wont stop Hermione from trying. I'm really glad you liked the snippet with Lavender and Romilda, I knew that I would have to change the events of this scene slightly to continue to tilt the story in the dramione direction so I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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