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Review:academica says:
Okay, so this chapter wasn't action-packed, but I liked it pace-wise because I think it's good practice to follow through logically with events and not to just jump around between the more "juicy" events. I also liked getting a look at Hermione's relationship with her parents in this chapter; their surprise was really cute!

I noticed a few technical issues in this chapter that I just thought I'd mention, in case you want your beta to look over it again.

-"holiday's" should be holidays (without the possessive)
-"that had to of been" should be "that had to have been"

Next chapter!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this wonderful review. I know this chapter wasn't very interesting but I'm glad that you enjoyed it anyways. I'm also one to like when a story has chapters that are filler like but are needed. Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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