Hey Gabbie! I'm here avec your review! I was immediately excited because my sister is called Roxanna so she basically has an HP character with the same name which is super cool!
I really liked how you included Lee and Alicia as it was nice to see that they ended up together, despite Lee's attempts of getting Angelina to date him at Hogwarts he still ended up happy! I liked it as people tend to forget about the quidditch team, even though were a massive part of their lives, so it was nice to see Alicia included. Yay Oliver and Katie made an appearance as well! And they're together double yay! You've got to love Olatie, Kaliver(?) stories ;D
I thought it was nice to change Fred's name to Perce, however at times I did confused when Percy and Perce where mentioned close together who was who.
I thought you captured the fun loving atmosphere of Roxanne's home brilliantly, and it's exactly what I imagined life would be like, if I was raised by George and Angelina!
I liked that you made Audrey Chinese, as Percy always seemed rather drab and boring, but the fact that his wife is rather exotic for the Weasley clan makes him perhaps more interesting than I thought he was!
Another note on the Weasley clan, I was so glad to see them all there. The only suggestion I would give is more clarity on everyone's ages, as I did find it confusing over who was in what year, and who wasn't in Hogwarts anymore.
Ooh! A Malfoy! How controversial to be seen with a Weasley! I can't wait to get to know the backstory behind this as it's bound to be intriguing!
Overal I thought this was a great start, as it was really funny and entertaining! I really enjoyed Roxanne's perspective as it's one I've never really read before! I'm off to the next chapter now! Kiana :)
Author's Response: HellO!
Thanks for coming to read this, its always nice reading your lovely reviews! :3 Your sister has a pretty awesome name, she must be quite pleased with herself! Hahaha.
You know, I never stopped thinking that the Quidditch team went their separate ways without keeping in touch. I like to think that they loved each other then, fought together at Hogwarts and love each other even more. If that makes any sense? I think going through something like that is really traumatic and that you need as much love as you can get. :D
Alicia and Lee got together, yes and Oliver and Katie! Hm. Kaliver? I like that one! Hahah. Uhm, let's see Lalicia? I dunno. Hahhaaha.
I thought I'd try something a little different with Fred the Second by having Roxie call him by his middle name. But it did get a tad confusing on who was who after a minute so I might make sure to add in some things so you all don't get confused. :3
Roxanne's home is all about love and destruction, if you're living with George destroying things I mean. Hahah. She's got a happy home life. :D
With Audrey, I had to do something different and I thought that there should be a bit more diversity in the Weasley clan. I like to see Percy with someone he can't handle and she has her own story which explains all about that. Oh, yes, Percy isn't quite the same stuffy git from the HP books. He's changed quite a bit. :)
Oh, the kid's ages. I should have gone into more detail about it but I sort of ignored it for later. I actually have it written down somewhere...just got to find my notes because they're all at least a year or two apart. :p
Hahaha, yes! A Malfoy! An OC Malfoy boy that I dumped on poor little Roxanne and things sort of go down hill from here for her. :3
Not too many Roxanne fics out there, which is a shame and I'm glad that you enjoyed this, thanks so much for coming with this great review! :D