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Review:Pixileanin says:
First of all, let me tell you that I love the fast-paced feel and the tone that you took writing this piece. I thought the air of mystery was pretty well thrust upon me with all the happenstances everywhere.

You've brought a lot of familiar characters on the scene in this first chapter. It makes me wonder how you will be using all of them in this story. I can't wait to see what Pavarti has to say about her wand ending up at a crime scene. Very intriguing.

I liked Ron's musings about Scorpius and also the way that the back story bits flew past us and touched ground just long enough for us to soak it in. I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this. I think I'm going to have a lot of fun reading this too!

Author's Response: Hey there!

I wanted this to be fast paced in the beginning, so that I could express the urgency of what's happening and the impact it's having on all the characters involved. And yes, there are plenty of characters. All their fates are written down in my little blue notebook (because I'd probably mess this up if I didn't have a plan in mind).

Thank you so much for your lovely review and I'm looking forward to hearing your opinion on what follows!

Ral

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