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Review:Jchrissy says:
I like Dorcas's idea of following the rules. it sounds like the safest plan.

Her thoughts revolving around letting it happen and backing off make me so sad. I just wish that her and Severus would talk about it and realize they both want to be together still even if they're too stubborn to realize it. And obviously it doesn't help that Marlene is gone, just adding more to this list for poor Dorcas to be sad about. it's like every single time she thinks about it she's is rubbing salt in such a bad wound.

I am going to start crying. This is so sad because he's talking about going to France after the mission and then part of me thinks that maybe they can go to France together and live happily ever after but we all know how this ends.

You are the meanest person in the world. I'm doing this whole review as I read thing and I just keep getting so excited because he just asked her to come with him and she's going and they can live happily ever after. But they won't. Unless you'll surprise me and the end will be AU?? Please??

No no no I am not ready for this to happen. get Lucius out of the house and bring Dorcas back.

If I cry at the end of this all, I'm never going to let you hear the end of it.

Author's Response: Yes, Dorcas should follow rules and keep herself out of trouble. Yes, they are both stubborn people, one out of necessity and one because he doesn't know any other way to be.

Here's where I think I need to offer more chocolate. Do you like almonds? Because I have a few chocolate bars with almonds in them. I hear that the extra protein keeps you from getting a severe sugar crash. That might be important, since there are still a few more chapters to go and I don't want you sleeping through the rest of your day. I also hear that France is nice. If you ask sweetly, Severus might let you rent that cottage sometime. ;)

Ahh, Lucius. At least he has great hair...

*offers more chocolate* I suppose you're never going to let me hear about those extra pounds either? *sigh*

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