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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Hi, I just read this story and enjoyed it immensely. It was nicely paced and just the right length to read in one sitting. Your excellent writing shows through here as always. The descriptions flowed smoothly through the changing moods and scenes of the story. It also built up nicely with enough unpredictability to keep the reader curious and engaged. It didn't take long for me to be completely immersed and captivated once the story got going. The opening discussion with 'the counselor' scene put us into the story right away, introduced us to Hermione's career world, and demonstrated her formidable tenacity and debating skills which would later come into use. Your characterizations and dialogue were excellent, and your descriptions vivid, not overdone or underdone.

All in all, this story had just the right feel. It created suspense and a real sense of danger. When the action happened, it was intense enough and went on long enough to be satisfying and exciting. And you brought it to a satisfying close. This was an excellent and well-executed story. The writing was polished with no flaws. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. A well-written, suspenseful, action story is always a delight to find on the archive, and this one is great!

Author's Response: Hi, there! I'm so pleased to hear that you enjoyed it. I actually got the idea for this story when Conspiracy of Blood was about a third of the way done. I wrote and outline and the first scene with Hermione and Al and then set it aside until just recently. I do that a lot, actually.

It's really good to know that the story's atmosphere worked for you. I did a fair bit of tweaking to try to get it just so.

Thanks so much for reading and taking a minute to review!

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