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Review:Pixileanin says:
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Alright, this was an unexpected twist. I can honestly say that I am intrigued with where you are taking things. First off, I applaud your use of canon events to start the story off, and secondly, instead of having Ron stare blankly at Hermione in pity or some other staring-type encounter, you gave him an entirely new thing to stare at. Not only was Hermione so completely engrossed in her own pain and upset that Ron and Lavendar hadn't noticed that the room was occupied, but she had failed to notice that she had stumbled upon someone else's hiding spot as well.

Very interesting first chapter.

Author's Response: YAY for unexpected twists! This whole story should be for the most part, ground in canon events. I'm trying to stick to canon but yet adding in some dramione moments, and slightly changing events around a bit. Yes it was a bit interesting to add in that Draco had been hiding as well, but I would like to think that he was upset about not being able to figure things out yet. I'm so excited about your review! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

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