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Review:Pixileanin says:
Now that the war has touched them all personally, I can only imagine how seriously they will all take their lessons from now on. The Prefects have a daunting job of keeping the peace and I'm sure it won't go very smoothly at all. I love how you were able to add a bit of magical intrigue into this section with the development of the patronus communication. It would be just their style to get their patronuses to talk to one another. That was pretty cool, and it also helped to lighten up the mood a bit. It also gave Lily more insight into James' feelings, which should move things along nicely.

I felt so relieved when James openly forgave Sirius and Lily for keeping their secret from him. At least they all have one less thing to feel bad over.

Bellatrix's section was dark, yet again. How could it be anything other than dark? She's so single-mindedly insane with need. It's rather disgusting, the way you portray her, but in a good way, if that's possible. I can only imagine how her husband takes that kind of devotion. I guess it's something he would be afraid to discuss with someone like her.

Now I wonder what could be next...

Author's Response: Hi!

I was a bit worried about my choice with the Patronuses... mainly because there was never anything in canon to make us think the Marauders and Frank were the creators. But... there was never anything that said they weren't, either :P. So I'm really happy that you think it fit well.

I have so much fun with these Bellatrix's sections. Creepy, right? I'm actually working on another one right ow. *cackles madly*

Thanks for another wonderful review, m'dear ♥


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