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Review:Jchrissy says:
I don't even know how you write Severus the way you do. He's so... he's everything he should be. He has the heart that for so long no one was sure existed, he cares so much for Dorcas and just needs someone to remind him that he isn't bad, useless, anything. But then there are these instances of power where, before he gets that sense of revulsion in himself, it's easy to understand why he became part of the DE circle in the first place. Part of him wants that power so bad while part of him hates it and hates that he wants it and ugh.

I'm so happy Dorcas come into the shop, I just want to pluck her up and hug her though :(.

The entire scene where he goes into Avery's mind.. takes away what would condemn them both to death... it was just so vivid and incredible. You have such an insane talent for story telling, you crazy girl. I just felt so raw after that, although I did enjoy watching Avery suffer. Is that terrible?

His life has so much chaos in it.. I just want him and Dorcas to cuddle on the couch in a happy world where Voldemort doesn't exist and none of these differences matter and ugh.

Awesome chapter, my dear.

Author's Response:
Blood, sweat and tears.

That might be a bit of exaggeration, and I'm sure it was easier writing Severus at the time, but my memory is a bit fuzzy after all the post-writing therapy sessions.

The mind-wipe scene was the genesis for this whole story. I'm glad you appreciated it. Maybe that's why I can't remember much...

I think my favorite part of your review was when you used "ugh", not once, but twice. I guess I don't have to worry about the story being "not dark enough". ;)

Thanks for your extremely kind words!


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