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Review:Pixileanin says:
Oh goodness, it's Bellatrix, fawning over the Dark Lord! I love how you drew us into the scene, literally through the window even. Lucius' caution and his hesitancy was definitely in character, for me at least. I found that his wish to have Bellatrix's eagerness a bit disturbing. Maybe he'd feel that way at this age, being younger and still sold on the whole blood purity thing. Yes, I believe he would be.

That whole scene with Sirius and Belle was my favorite in this chapter. I loved the tension between the two of them and the way that Sirius discovers (with us) more about this girl and how she needs him more as a friend right now than anything else and how he's willing to be that for her. Here, I'm wondering how much she knows about his situation and how parallel they are. Sirius knows, of course, but I can't remember how much Belle has discovered about him. She's a transfer student and I guess I'm bad at recalling details from your last few chapters about that. Maybe he will have an opportunity to share more later? Anyway, I am certainly even MORE curious about Belle's background now.

Remus' feint about his wrist was a nice ploy to get all of the boys out of the dorm without the girls suspecting much.

I chuckled at James' amazement when he made that comment about his growing antlers. It was such a James thing to think. I think I might chuckle at it tomorrow too.

"The September full moon, the largest of the year - elegant and beautiful to most people. To the four of them, it was a mixture of Hell and adrenaline."

The way you had James think about his transformation was fascinating. I loved how it tied in to the act of being human for him to turn into one, and how he recalled being the animal that helped him make the shift back.

Again, another lovely chapter with engaging characters that I want to return to.

Until next time,

pix

Author's Response: I kind of, in my head, have Belle knowing most of what the rest of the group does. But because that's in my head and not in the story, it definitely makes sense why you wouldn't know how much she knows of Sirius's home life :P. I'm going to sneak that in there somewhere.. hahah

Belle is one of those characters that I feel like I can take everything else out on. When Lily wouldn't do something because she's too respectful, Belle would because she doesn't give a damn. When Alice wouldn't make a comment because it would be unkind, Belle will because she could care less about being kind to people she doesn't care for. And yeah. She's just the one that makes me stay sane with Alice and Lily's sweet little-nesses.

James would be delighted if you just continued chuckling about his horn length! Although, he's not thrilled because he says you clearly don't understand how difficult it is to adjust to something sticking of your head. Women.. don't know nothin'

Okay. I'm clearly too tired to be responding to reviews and not making sense. Thank you so much for this amazing review, m'dear ♥



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