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Review:slayground says:
Review battle yay!

This is so interesting! I'm already hooked, and it's only one chapter in XD I love spy/action-y type things, especially when they're ones that make me laugh, and this one was no exception to the rule. I LOVED the British/American banter (I'm English/Canadian myself, so I can relate on both sides as well :P )

Your story grabbed me right from the beginning - characterization is incredibly important for me, and right away I realized who the OC's were, what they were about, things like that. I'm really liking Dalton, she actually reminds me quite a bit of myself, which just makes it all that much more enjoyable for me to read. Of course, I'm sure you didn't write her with me in mind, but that's neither here nor there XD

There were a few minor, MINOR spelling/grammar errors, but I'm not even going to bother pointing them out because they were simple typos, and really didn't distract from the writing at all. It's nothing a little proofreading wouldn't fix - I'm notoriously bad for it, so I suppose I shouldn't even be talking, but oh well :P

Anyways, LOVED this! (and yes, I thought of Fudge as soon as I read it)

Can't wait to read more! You better be updating this soon ;)

xx Molly

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