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Review:Jeanie says:
I've just read this, and I was getting so into it, AND NOW IT'S ON A CLIFFHANGER AND GAHH.

Okay, so I love this story. It's beautiful. It's so wonderful that I'm losing myself in the emotions of the characters.

Your writing is fantastic, but I just had to point out a few small grammatical errors:
1. Your and you're.
Your - as a possessive (ex. "Get your shoes,")
You're - as in you are (ex. "You're beautiful,")
2. It's and its.
Its - as a possessive.
It's - as in it is.
3. LAST ONE . Commas being used in a quotation.
Commas are used at the end of a quotation if the thought is unfinished, if the thought is continued later in the paragraph, or if something like "He said" follows the quotation.
They are also used around an interjection in the thought (ex. a name).
EXAMPLES:
"Please, Hermione, you have to believe me,"

Aside from those three things, I LOVE THIS OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS YOU ARE PERFECT.

It feels like I AM Hermione... good lord, I have no life.

Can't wait for another chapter.

Always reading,
Jeanie

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