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Review:Santa! says:
Hello again! Here to leave my final review on this story before my identity is revealed! :P

HUGO CAN DO MAGIC. I was a little confused as to whether this was wandless or not. I didn't notice any reference to him having performed the spell with a wand, but I was unsure whether this was what you intended. I remember that young children can often perform certain magic, but that must be wandless too, as they only get their wand aged 11. Ah well, either way, I was pleased that the Slytherins were covered in that potion, aha.

One thing I did find a little unlikely in this chapter was the lack of awareness outside of first year. Lily said that the whole year was talking about it, and the Prefect had no idea what had happened. To me, I would have expected the story to spread more like wildfire by the time that the Prefect questioned him.

I did think that the ending to this chapter was brilliant! When he was being chased by the Slytherins, I wondered where he might go to escape them, and thought you might even make him conveniently bump into the Weasleys. I was pleased that you didn't though, and I like the mystery and intrigue that you've left at the end of this chapter.

I will definitely be coming back to review chapter six once you update!

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