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Review:Santa! says:
... and I'm back again!

I think the stand-out thing in this chapter for me was Eliana. I like the fact that you chose to centre this chapter a little more on their growing friendship, because that's obviously what's been lacking for Hugo at the minute. I think you did a great job throughout all of the speech when adding in blushing, looking away etc. during the more awkward areas.

As for Connor, his enthusiasm is certainly undeniable and I like that he's perhaps not the first person that you'd think Hugo would make friends with. Hugo's comment about Hagrid keeping a dragon in his hut made me smile too. :)

I loved your example of logical thinking on the question to enter the Common Room. The way he worked out that it wasn't time related, told himself that and then thought about it from a different angle was a cool addition I thought. I sat and thought about it for a moment, but I didn't get that answer, so I'll say it once again, it's a good thing that I'm in Gryffindor!

What is a friend? That topic was a surprise to read in here, but when I was reading them debate the point, I sat and considered what I myself would consider a frund. I agree more with Hugo- I feel like you must be able to trust somebody and know them fairly well before you can consider them a frund. Before that... I'm not sure. I think that providing such a thought-provoking question for the reader was brilliant. :)

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