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Review:Pixileanin says:
Awww!

Very fairytale-like ending for Rose! You ahd her so convinced that the reunion was going to be a bad idea, and the shame that she felt about still being single so inescapable. Everyone wants someone to love, and Rose just hadn't found her someone yet, or at least he hadn't let her know how he felt about her yet. I'm glad you let her have this moment of triumph over her self-torture.

The way that he just walks right up to her, knows what she needs and then takes her back into the room: it's like he knew her really well. I'd have liked a little hint of how and why they hadn't gotten together before this, or maybe they had and it wasn't quite right yet. If you're planning on writing that other one-shot from his POV, I'd love to read it!

You wrote her from such a "I'm so inside my own head that I can't seem to get out" place. I liked the style of this. I enjoyed reading this!

Author's Response: Yeah a lot of people really would like to see more, something that gives a hint at what happened before this/ how he knew what she needed and I do have plans on making that happen someday. This review was really awesome and completely made my day! I'm so glad you enjoyed Rose, and I feel that she is so realistic. I mean I know I've felt so alone and almost like a loser because it seems like everyone else is pairing off and then there's me all alone! I'm so glad you enjoyed this oneshot! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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