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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was a beautifully written story. You have portrayed Narcissa really well. You wrote her just like canon.

I loved the insight you gave into the just-after-the-war-ended moments. I have hardly read any such fics talking about that same day, so this was definitely very unique and original.

My favourite line was: It’s too late for us, love, Narcissa thought sadly. He bled us dry and now we have nothing.
It really was so heartbreaking and sad. It touched me.

I loved that this ended at a positive and hopeful note. It was so sweet :)

All in all, this story had a beautiful plot, amazing narrative with great descriptions, well-crafted characters, and superb scenes and flow. I really liked reading it, it was just perfect.

Brilliant writing as always,
10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi AD! Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry that I took a little while to respond. My graduate work leaves me very little time for hobbies, and so unfortunately HPFF has to sit on the back burner for much of the time. But I very much appreciate your review!

I'm honestly surprised you haven't reviewed this before, because I you know love the Malfoys. Narcissa is definitely my favorite. This story was really sad and somewhat painful to write, given the setting and Narcissa's initial feelings, but I wanted to see her pull her family from the ashes at the end. After all, she was so lucky to get to keep her husband and son alive and out of prison.

Thanks again for stopping by!

-Amanda

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