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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
This was quite an original one-shot. It was an enjoyable read because it was short and distinctly stands out among all of the cliches that I have recently read (I really do wish there were more one-shots like this one).

I also found your second person writing style to be unique. This is the first fanfiction I have read from such a perspective, and I would say you have perfected it. Now if only I had that sort of skill...

Let's just say that I had to restrain myself from full-out sobbing like a baby at the beginning of the one-shot. You very accurately captured George's emotions, making them seem very realistic and relatable. Poor George!

I liked the Weasley twins' interaction with one another. Even Fred and George were able to insert a little humor into such a grim situation. They seemed accurately portrayed, and their dialogue was very fitting.

I only found one spelling mistake (nothing major):
"The fighting with your mother was endless and exhaustingt but youíre pleased you didnít back down."

Excellent job!

Author's Response: Hello :)

Thank you for a lovely review!! I'm glad you got on with the second person style... It took me ages to decide whether to go for it or not and in the end I am glad I did :)

Oh, sorry you got upset :( Writing the thing killed me though! I didn't want either Fred or George to be alone and it's so heartbreaking writing the two of them when they are!!

I'm so happy you think I got the humour between the two of them right. It's always a huge concern for me when I try and write these pair!!

Thanks for pointing out the mistake... I will go and correct it as soon as I get the chance!!

Thank you so much again!
Lauren


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