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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello, Laurenzo7321 here with your review :)

So I thought this was another great chapter to your story. It moved the story on well and also gave us more insight into your characters.

I love Phoebe! I think you've created a great character with her craziness! I love the friendship between the three girls though, I think you've made it a really good teenage drama so well done!

I liked the idea of the shopping trip, but it felt a little rushed in some places. I think you could have told us lots more about the girls day out and with Phoebe being there had lots more fun with it.

I like how you're building up the story around Connor, you really have me intrigued as to where the baby fits into it all and Nikola. I'm really hoping theres an explanation to it all so that Connor and Nikola are siblings or something!

I loved the last bit where she checked her watch and realised she didn't have one on when she got back. It was a really funny ending! I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this story next!

Lauren

Author's Response: Hey and thank you once again :D

Phoebe has to be favourite when writing this and she's as mad as a hatter!

Phoebe and the shopping trip - finding mad things for her do, check. Off to write it now!

As for the Connor/Nikola/Baby thing all is revealed in chapter three :D

Thanks again :)
-Potterfan310
Soph x


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