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Review:momotwins says:
Interesting start. The forger and his daughter were very lively characters, I liked their scene. I did think it was odd that they seem to expect Roxanne to be telling them the truth about what she wants on her papers when she's there for forged papers. You'd think they'd ask what she wants them to say rather than for her entire history. There's not much detail on the plot yet but enough to get interest, and Roxanne seems good so far from what I can see. Your descriptive language is very good, and I didn't see any grammatical errors. Everything looks good, basically :) I hope you continue the story!

Author's Response: Well the way I saw it was more like this. If one would go to a forger and wanted a complete new identity that person would want certain things on their paper and so did they think. I mean they don’t expect her to say the truth but the story she wants on paper. That was exactly what they were implying haha. Glad to hear so! I surely will continue this.

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