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Review:academica says:
Hey! I decided to take a break from BTF and come check this out instead. Sorry for the delay on doing a return review for your very kind swap.

I fell in love the way a sixteen year old does--fast, hard, and irrevocably. I love this, because to me it conveys a more mature Tonks, one able to look back on her past with wisdom. I'm used to always seeing her as fairly intense, be it jokingly or in the throes of conflict, but this quote seems to have come from someone who is war-weary and has grown up a lot because of it.

Oh, poor thing. It's interesting to see graduation-related tension that's not related to an impending war, at least not directly. The two of them just feel so normal--I can remember thinking some of the same things about friends and boyfriends during that time. I can see why they're attracted to one another, and I love that they both seem to possess a rebellious attitude and a good sense of humor.

I'll kill him. I will. I'll feed him to one of his precious dragons. And see? Fun Tonks is back! I love how we never got too serious. Too serious wouldn't have fit with the characters you've established, especially Tonks. I feel like she would be very difficult to write, and I think you did a really wonderful job with keeping her balanced.

This is a really good start--thanks for the swap!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Amanda! I hope you had such an amazing Christmas ♥

Don't worry, sometime I need a break from BTF too :P

Tonks is so difficult for me to write. That combined with the first person is probably why I have yet to do the 3rd chapter. This switches between Tonks and Charlie, and Charlie was so much fun to write in chapter 2 that I don't want to go back to Tonks, hahaah.Poor girl.

This review was just the motivation I needed to work on the next chapter, though ♥ Thank you so much for stopping by :)!


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