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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Katie! I'm a wee bit late with this review, and I hope you'll forgive me for it. I did respond to five reviews, and then my sister and I were trying to scrape together dinner, since our parents decided to eat out with friends of theirs. And then, because my memory is basically shot through with holes, I sat down and read Game of Thrones for a while. But I'm here now -- and I rushed through that chapter! Good chapters always feel the shortest.

I can tell that I'm already going to like the banter between Fee and Septimus! They're going to butt heads a lot and it's going to be so fun to read, and I love reading this and thinking about all the future Weasleys, and how Septimus's reactions are pretty much like I'd expect Ron's to be, or even Arthur's. I love a good Weasley. ♥ Although if he keeps insisting on calling Fee 'sweetie' then I agree with Alphard -- it'll be his funeral!

I did smell a love triangle, then? Ooh, I desperately hope so -- I know how cliche they are, but I absolutely cannot resist a well-written love triangle. And you know how highly I think of your writing, so I'm very excited to see where this takes the pair of them! As a random side note, I'm glad Fee's a bit frustrated with Tom's decision to work at Borgin and Burke's. That's something that's always sort of nagged at the back of my mind, after reading that in HBP. If he was such a talented wizard... why? But that's one of the things I already really like about this story: You're taking the time to explain little canon things like that, and it does feel more real that way, which is always something I like to see. :)

And that letter at the end! New theory: Are they from Tom? I'm going with either Tom or Fee's mother, but haven't made up my mind yet (because I am the most indecisive person on this planet). And speaking of Fee's family, I think it's so sad that the Muggles who raised her disowned her for being a witch. I can see it happening, actually... but it's still very sad. :(

Lovely chapter, as always! I'm so pleased you got a chapter of this into the queue before it closed down. ♥ I can't believe I've already read five chapters of this story, though... Time flies when you're having fun!

Seriously: Excellent job! I await chapter six with much anticipation!

Author's Response: Don't worry Rachel, you're forgiven! :D My memory is terrible though- somehow when it comes to HPFF-related stuff and especially Sheer Abandon, I remember vast amounts, but when we're talking about RL, my brain is like a sieve!

I didn't actually think of the similarity between Septimus and his descendants when I was writing this, but now that you mention it, I definitely see your point! (And I can't understand how I've managed to plot out chapter eight: "Of Weasels And Ferrets" without remembering Arthur v Lucius and Ron v Draco... *sigh* This is a classic example of my subconscious ability to retain vast HPFF-related knowledge.) And oh, absolutely! :P

I know, but I think love triangles are the kind of cliche that you look at affectionately and think, awww. Kind of like a security blanket in fanfic-reading, if you will. That nagged at me too, but in a way, I can understand it because he wanted to research Dark artefacts, and also find Slytherin's locket- something he probably felt he had the right to possess- and Borgin and Burke's was ultimately the easiest and legal way of doing that. But of course, it doesn't change Fee's feelings. Awww, thank you! ♥

Okay, let's say your new theory is correct: how then do you explain the letter that Fee received when she was eleven, in chapter two? ;)

I was a bit confused when you said that the Muggles who brought her up disowned her, until I re-read Walburga and Orion's discussion and realized how Walburga spoke could be put into several different contexts. Fee's "parents" did put her into a psychiatric hospital, but they didn't disown her. More on that will be explained in a future chapter. :)

Haha, I'm almost finished with chapter seven and I have a future, unnumbered chapter written, but I was dithering on whether to put this into the queue so much that it ended up being submitted eight minutes before the closure and was the last chapter the validators validated. Whoops... ♥

Thank you! (and I apologize in advance for chapter six!)

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