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Review:my_voice_rising says:
Okay, first of all, I'm so sorry that it's taken me this long to get to you! Life has been a bit busier than usual lately. But I'm so glad you re-requested for this story, because I really enjoyed the first chapter!

Ugh, Greyback is so horrible. And I can't believe how careless he's being around the Wizards who are putting him on trial. He's so disgusting, dancing the line between casual conversation and threat with Albus. "Tell him I said hi." Ugh!

Oh my gosh. I want to be able to leave constructive criticism, but I was so transfixed on the entire scene in the Pensieve room that I couldn't stop writing. So well-done! I love the juxtaposition of Hermione's memory of the Battle of Hogwarts with the actual fight going on in the room. Sets up for a very nice image. And I was so glad that they caught Greyback, at least for now.

Seamus is absolutely breaking my heart. So he sent her the tip-off. Wow. I love seeing him and Hermione interacting; you rarely see that in canon. And I love Lavender/Seamus even more.

Another phenomenal chapter; my apologies for not having anything constructive to say. The chapter sucked me in entirely.

Author's Response: Hi!

In turn, I apologize for taking so long to respond. Busy, busy, busy...

Greyback is already beginning to lose a measure of his self-control before Hermione even shows him the memory of the battle. Seeing her again started to awaken some of his animalistic tendencies. Seeing the memory completed the process, causing him to completely lose control.

I picked up a lovely bit of head canon along the way that put Seamus and Lavender in a secretive relationship during the year that Snape and the Carrows ran Hogwarts. It seemed like a good way to allow Hermione some catharsis after she has it out with Greyback.

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. It feels good to know that it all worked for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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