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Review:MargaretLane says:
Hmm, I wonder what that music is. Intriguing.

*laughs* That sounds so typical of George.

Yikes, Ron just expects him to be sorted into Gryffindor. This might not end well. Quite a different reaction from Harry's in the epilogue, but that makes sense, because Ron tends to speak without thinking.

*laughs at Ginny and Harry's plan* Love the way you show Ron and Hermione's differing priorities.

In the paragraph about James's Howler, you've written Hogwarts as Howgarts.

Really like the way you've characterised Albus here.

Hmm, Hugo sounds like a possible Hufflepuff, although the next chapter is called something like Weasleys and Ravenclaws, which could indicate that he'll be a Ravenclaw. Looking forward to finding out.

One other mistake I noticed was that Hugo says something like "my year in more brawny than brainy." I'm assuming it should be "is" and not "in".

Aw, love Lily worrying about whether being in different houses will affect their friendship.

Ron won't be happy. I'd say Hermione will be thought.

Great start to the story. Now to read on.

Author's Response: Hi!

This intrigue will be a nice distraction for the coming chapters, I'm glad it got you curious :)

Harry and Ginny's plan was so absurd - and pretty much the only way a parent can discipline their kid while he's away for the school year! Of course, it's nothing too horrible but just a little shame usually helps putting a kid back into the right track... for a while!

I will check out that error, thanks for pointing it out :)

Ron won't mind, he'll be worried about his son because he knows how quiet and not too social Hugo is but there's nothing to be ashamed of being a Ravenclaw, right?

Thanks for the review!


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