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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
In general, this was a very sad and heartbreaking chapter, but there were moments where I was amused, curious, and even angry as well. There are a lot of emotions at play here, and I think you did a great job of portraying them.

I have never EVER read a story centered around house elves, or how they are imprisoned or... enslaved I guess would be a better word. I think it's about high time the house elves had their own story, though! Of course, I'd hope for them to have a happier ending than this, though, as I'm sure we all do!

The funniest line of the entire thing was when you said that the master coming to feed the poor elves was "rarer than finding a Cornish Pixie doing ballet". Despite the serious nature of what's going on here, I had to chuckle at that. And I had a slight suspicion that it would be Umbridge who walked through the door, and I'm actually kind of glad it was; it helped me to make the connection between how horrible she is and how horrible the master is.

I noticed a few small spelling and grammar errors, but everything flowed nicely! This was a pretty good chapter, but I'm not sure if I want to read more (only because I don't want to see those poor elves suffer anymore!) It's so sad! Overall, good job!

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