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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello again!

It's the laaast one (read that in the Dodo's voice from Ice Age when talking about the watermelon).

I loved all the detail and emphasis you put on with the wands! It was really great! :D

You can also find more about wands on Pottermore, when I first read it I was so happy, I looked like a cat with catnip. :p

Just one thing, you've written:
Thor whispered demandingly,

"How is it your wand spit out a jet of blue light?"

That line doesn't make much sense. Maybe if there was a comma, it might clear it up. Or instead of spit, you write spat? Or add a that before your wand?

Anyway, I think that was the only typo I noticed. :)

This was a really good chapter, it was really ~mysterious~ and I loved that! :D

Anyway, I can't wait for the update! :D

10/10! :D

HAPPY HOLIDAYS! :D

Author's Response: Hey lovely!

Yes, the last chapter until the next update, which I haven't had the proper time to construct. I've been so caught up these past few months, exhausting all my brain power on school work, catching up with my weaker scoring classes that I haven't typed anything at all for chapter thirteen, as well as further chapters to all my other stories. The fact that I won't be able to submit anything at all until next year also dissapoints me, because then I'd be falling waaay behind than I intentionally planned, but I guess it's alright.

And yesh, I understand the Ice Age reference. I friggin' LOVED that scene. To be honest, I haven't seen that movie in a long time. I need to go watch it again. I love Sid. He's so...awesome. :D

And Pottermore! I haven't visited that site in forever. I got my account this last summer, and I remember staying up till one in the morning just to get caught up in all the action. I didn't check much into the whole wandlore though. I'll go check it out sometime, when I have the chance to visit the site again.

hehe...cat in catnip... XD

Ahh! Typos! Thank you for pointing this out to me. I'll bear in mind to fix it again when I undergo my second round of revising and editing.

And I am really glad that you enjoyed this chapter! Hopefully I don't leave you hanging too long for an update. I'm starting to think a lot of the people who favorited probably believe I've lost hope and abandoned this story because it's just been so long. Hopefully I can get one up once the new year comes around.

And happy holidays to you too! *throws a butt-load of silver, green, and scarlett confettie everywhere while singing "We Wish You a Merry Christmas"*

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