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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh that was so sweet and yet funny at the same time! Poor Percy, basically a nobody and made fun of all the time in a place where he used to have power of sorts. The bit with his family talking to him in his head and trying to give him advice on how to ask Audrey out was rather funny. I'm continuing to like your Audrey and how funny and different she is! And from what I've seen of Percy in this, I like him as well! I'm so excited for their little lunch date and I can't wait to see how that actually turns out for them, what with Audrey thinking that Percy is a vampire, I can guess that it might get a little interesting! I loved how Percy's family while being only in his head were still very much like themselves, it really added to the story. I really felt bad for Percy during this chapter though, what with everyone making fun of him, tipping over his trolly, and just plain old being rude to him. I think I would have even said yes to him after witnessing all that stuff just for the sake of not giving everyone else another reason to make fun of him! It was a very enjoyable read and I look forward to reading more! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: I really love the Weasleys and how they interact, and couldn't resist the opportunity to get them all together and ask for their two cents, even if they weren't /actually/ there. :P Percy's really grown on me since starting this story. He used to be my least-favorite Weasley.

Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely review!


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