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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Haha! This was a cute chapter! I'm really very interested to see where things go from here, but I'm also kind of satisfied with what I read; I feel like there's enough information that this chapter could stand on its own as a one-shot. (I'm not suggesting that or anything, just saying that it didn't feel like it left me hanging!)

There were times when it felt a little bit rushed, but I realize it's only the first chapter and honestly, I think it works that it's rushed, because that's exactly what this is about: rushing around to your family's house on Christmas. I really like how it got straight down to business, giving us all the juicy family details straight from the get-go.

Being a part of ANY family can be hectic and trying at Christmas, and of COURSE that would be especially true of being in the Weasley family. I mean, come on! There's just so many of them!! I really loved the list of the current family issues at the beginning, and the way you gave us more information a little further down with the answers to all the questions everyone was asking. For example, "Yes my stuff was ready at the Burrow".

And my favorite lines of the whole chapter was this: "No, Uncle Ron had not given up on his quest to put an end to the wedding. Yes. Aunt Hermione and Rose were not talking to him." I thought both of those were absolutely hilarious, and typical Ron being stubborn!

Overall I think this is a really cute chapter, and I can't wait to read more! Well done! 10/10

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