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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Okay, so as part of the Review Extravaganza, I wound up reading this chapter before anything else, and I AM COMPLETELY HOOKED. I literally HAVE to read the rest of this now; it's just that brilliant!

Although there were a few tiny errors, this is so, SO well-written that I hardly even noticed. And you did such a beautifully wonderful job with characterization and the emotions here! At the beginning I was just sort of laughing at Ron and Hermione's behavior, but as the chapter went on, I actually became nervous myself! And that's saying something!

I don't think I've ever read a chapter about Ron and Hermione's wedding, but it wouldn't matter if I did, because this fits so perfectly well that I'd easily believe it to be Canon... minus Hermione's first line, of course! :P

I also really love how this is as much about Harry and Ginny's relationship (or lack thereof), as it is about Ron and Hermione's relationship and their wedding. I was halfway expecting Harry to propose by the end of the Chapter, with all the awkward glances he and Ginny kept exchanging.

I think my favorite line in the whole chapter was when Hermione said she'd had a minor panic attack and Fleur mouthed "minor?" in the background! I could just SEE Fleur doing that, and it was hilarious! I think this chapter is awesome, and I think it'd work really well as a one-shot, too! Great job and I can't wait to see where it goes from here! 10/10

Holiday Review Extravaganza Event Two.

Author's Response: Hey hey MrsJaydeMalfoy! Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad that it pulled you in and that you're lovin' the Hermione/Ron wedding as much as did, and I'll definitely do a read-through for some minor errors! Again, thank you so much for all your kind words, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

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