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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
You know, I was really nervous to read this fic it being tonks/charlie and all because I love remus/tonks but I found myself actually enjoying this first chapter and the way they are together. I was so nervous right along side Tonks that she was going to get dumped on graduation day so I was so happy when Charlie just said that it was going to be hard but that he wanted to try and make things work. The ending of this chapter was really cute and sweet as well. I loved the idea that if you really didn't know the spell well enough, it would sort of take over and do more than what you wanted such as breaking the plates for cleaning them too hard and spraying everything down. I'm interested to see who Ashton is as well. I mean I know you mention that he is Charlies roommate but I wonder what his part will be in this whole thing. Altogether I think that this was a wonderful beginning and I'm sure that Dan loved this! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hi darling! I'm so happy you liked how this started out! First of all, I know I didn't clarify this and I keep trying to remember to go back and fix it to make it more clear, but Ashton is a girl ;). Which is going to be even more problematic... ;).

I thought the idea sounded fun as well, with the cleaning spells that is. Because it can't be so easy as to wave your wand and make everything shiny, right??

Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing ♥ It put a huge smile on my face!

Jami


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