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Review:momotwins says:
Ah I couldn't resist your Christmas one! And it's fun to read Marauders now and then ;)

Lily staying at school to avoid Petunia's Muggle future in-laws is so sad. Poor girl. Petunia is a pretty crappy excuse for a sister. And Lily's boyfriend is a big fat jerk too. What a crap Christmas.

I did want to point out though that it's only the boys who can't go to the girls' dorm (or the stairs turn into slides). The girls can go to the boys' dorm without that happening. ;) They thought girls were more trustworthy, according to Hermione.

The food baby made me laugh. My best friend always says that. Lily and James are cute together. And slipping in a "silent night" on Christmas, lol. James is a bit touchy (teenage boys!) but he's such a nice guy.

You jumped between tenses a few times - present tense here and there - and I noticed a spot where James is speaking but it's marked "I said". Aside from that, I didn't notice any grammatical or spelling errors, so nicely done :)

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much for this! I really enjoyed writing this piece last year for the secret santa and I'm so glad that everyone else is finding it to be cute as well. Yeah the whole past tense then present tense is something I have a hard time with. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this piece and thought it was a cute Christmas read. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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