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Review:momotwins says:
Hi there! I've never read any of your stories before, but I couldn't resist a Molly/Arthur :)

Molly asking Arthur out was very sweet. Her nervousness and his blushing were very in character I think, and Molly's reluctance to ask a boy out rings true, for teenagers in the 1960s especially. I liked Molly pining for him with her friend too, that was cute.

If you want some concrit (and if you don't, feel free to ignore this paragraph), be careful of your punctuation. You have several places with extraneous commas or incorrectly used punctuation.

Very cute little story, good job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review. I really appreciated when I'm given some concrit as I feel it definitely helps me improve so your constructive criticism was much appreciated.

Punctuation has never been my strong point but hopefully I'm getting better with using it correctly.

Thanks again,
Charlie


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